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Tuesday, March 3, 2020

My Amazing Sestina

I saw a beautiful blue waterfall
I nearly fell off the side 
My friend Lachlan was with me
There was a melted marshmallow castle 
For a nice hiking night trip

I got Maccas at the top

This is my sestina for NZ writing.
we will be sending these to a school in hamilton.
We are looking forward to reading theirs.
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMarch 3, 2020 at 1:47 PM

    hi Caleb
    that looks really cool i like how you said added good descriptive words
    it had your story really interesting.
    Next time you could add a bit more words that describe the melted marshmallow castle.
    Other than that it looks really good.
    From Brooke

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